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  1. DrivenByHope
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    DrivenByHope When the eighth played his piece revealed light
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    Kind of wanted to create a thread on poetry and see others writing and all I've started writing poetry again and wanted to share one.

    The D.H illusions
    ___________

    His illusions brings forth
    the grand solutions follow
    this trail it may end at the
    wrong rail, so pay attention
    to the small details the only
    way to prevail is to step down
    the right trail careful don't step
    on the rusty nail for it's set to
    fail.

    So come on set sail we'll have
    a drink of ale but don't go pale
    it's marked another fail, so come
    on set course on a trail don't get
    electrocuted by a rail for you guessed
    it another fail, only one can prevail
    look through the smoke and mirrors
    for this man is a grand illusionist,
    come one come all careful not to
    fall.
     
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    I appreciate the art of poetry. I feel true poetic sense in waning in the world.
    I write every once in a while, with the goal of setting the words to music.
    My favorite poem of all time is “sure on this shining night” by James Agee. It gives me hope, but also room to feel what I feel.
    If I get brave enough I’ll share some of my work.
     
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    When I write I generally do so putting riddles within it I started writing when I was in mental health accommodation I found people with similar sickness understood the little riddles I hide in them and were able to interpret what it meant.
     
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    Wow. That’s amazing. I never thought about putting riddles in poetry. That’s brilliant.
     
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    Have been wondering: do you plan on publishing any of your work, or have you? I’d definitely be in line for a signed copy.
     
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    I've published some on allpoetry website not sure how good they to be honest but here.

    https://allpoetry.com/Restless_Moth
     
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    I write poems too sometimes i post some on my fb timeline or in another group when i get my courage back
     
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    Sorry

    Should I call and say sorry the hundred time again?
    Sorry to be a hard work
    Sorry to not crawl at your fee
    Sorry for not breaking in your face
    Sorry to be struck someplace without the strenght to call for help
    Sorry to doubt your caring side
    it wasn't on you
    no just her whispering me how much fake it was
    I have listened to her like i always do in the end
    Sorry for protecting you from a territory
    where only ice and earthquakes rule as masters
    Sorry to be out of reach
    Sorry if push comes to shove
    taking your hand and following you away from that bridge
    her or you?
    Sorry for the silence
    judgemental trauma waiting to see me crash and burn
    Sorry for contemplating drowning over you
    Sorry to be blind love's still an unknown factor
    Sorry if I'll push you away
    because you don't deserve that
    It was me thinking about one of my exes © 14 minutes ago, Anaelle Marcelle Nzoula sad pain
     

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